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From: sclaire-1 <54961957+sclaire-1@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 13 Nov 2019 04:54:47 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] Edit introduction of README.md (#12372)

The introductory paragraph has been edited to be more cohesive.
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 [crowdin]: https://crowdin.com/project/mastodon
 [docker]: https://hub.docker.com/r/tootsuite/mastodon/
 
-Mastodon is a **free, open-source social network server** based on ActivityPub. Follow friends and discover new ones. Publish anything you want: links, pictures, text, video. All servers of Mastodon are interoperable as a federated network, i.e. users on one server can seamlessly communicate with users from another one. This includes non-Mastodon software that also implements ActivityPub!
+Mastodon is a **free, open-source social network server** based on ActivityPub where users can follow friends and discover new ones. On Mastodon, users can publish anything they want: links, pictures, text, video. All Mastodon servers are interoperable as a federated network (users on one server can seamlessly communicate with users from another one, including non-Mastodon software that implements ActivityPub)!
 
 Click below to **learn more** in a video: